Rai Otawa, Kumo, Kage
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Rai Otawa, Kumo, Kage
Blast Sat Feb 14, 2009 3:45 pm
Name: Rai Otawa
Alias: Raiden
Gender: Male
Alliance: Kumogakure
Age: 32
Alignment: Good
Appearance:
Clan: None
Personality: Very honest and reliable, he always tries to be there for anyone and wants to be trusted. He likes to thinks and has plenty of witts. Moraly, he believes that you should never turn your back on who you trust and care for. He likes to talk to others and train. His favorite food is dumplings. he dislike arrogance. His dream is for his village to overcome any obstacle. His influences are his dad and friend
Ninja Rank: Kage
Skills/Specialties: Kensjutsu, Strategy
Elemental Affinity(ies): Lightning, Water, Earth
History/Background Story: Rai was born in the cloud village. In about two more years, is little brother was born, his name was Kenshi. His father was an elite jounin known through the land and his mom was stay at home person taking care of the family. As Kenshi and Kei got older, they had dreams of being even more than their father.
Rai was a collected kid, while Kenshi was the joker. He had wanted to join the academy right away, but he was only 7. His mom had total disagreement with the idea. She would always say it was too dangerous, while his dad said its time to toughen hime up abit, be ahead of his age.
Rai joined the academy at 7 to get a head start. He was one of the best in his class. He was said to be a a prodigy, of his father at least and would came the prestigious family one of the best in the next generation. His dad set the standard.
He was about to graduate at 8, but a tragedy happened. His father went on his third S-Rank mission. He was battling the enemy and was never found when the mission was done. Some say he was dead, others said he could handle the pressure so he ran away.
Rai was slacking due to the lost and the put downs about how his father was a coward, and how he would be too. After a while, it gave him a drive. He would defeat the odds, and bring his name back to the top. After the hardest training he had did by then, he graduated at 9. Kei was now a gennin and the best in his squad.
His squad leader tuaght everyone a summoning. Rai learned Kuyochise no jutsu: Dog. Since his chakra was very limited at the time, his dog was very small, but good enough for his time. Through exploring and doing missions, rai met a knew friend. His name was Kaiden. They were like stone, and had each others back threw thick and thin. That bond would last forever.
For becoming a gennin, he recieved a sword. Engraved was his family's name and one word, りょこう, 旅行, which meant Journey. It was there to say never give up on the journey and expect a reward for never giving up. It was a prized possesion. He only used it for good luck in hard battles.
Trainers from the village heard his name. He showed potentail and it gave him a chance. Not only did he progress for missions, he was taught by elite trainers and would be great. His younger brother was fading in the shadows. Kei had stregnth and entred the chuunin exams. He became a chuunin at 10 years old. It was a honor, as he was the number one rookie to be in the exams.
In His family, to be considered a real ninja, by the age of 12 you must have invented one Lightning jutsu. Every jutsu made form every child form generation to generation was written in the scroll of secret. Only the Otawa family, would be allowed to read, for one reason, it required a opening seal only know by the Otawa family and will never be said to others. Kei made a jutsu and was able to write his name and jutsu in the scroll. Then he got praised and teaching.
For years, he trained with elders and his other trainers. He found a teacher too. For a 4 years, he trained in the mountains and mastered the ninja arts. Rai came back to the village to remake his life. He showed great ability and was promoted to Jounin at 16. He went on some of those most important missions. He would be known as the the Kumo Village's Raiden.
His grandfather passed one night. He was an enturpenuer, owning a restuarant by the name of 'The Cherry Blossom' it was a succcesful place in his part of the village. Kai inheritted about 1/3 the money. Kai saved some of it for a family, and some for emergencies. The rest was used for toning up his inventory and armor.
Rai joined Anbu for the Kumo village going on stelth missions and assasinations. He went everywhere and thru this he could find out village techniques for the Kumo's use. It was a great help for the village strategy against enemies.
He took some time off form all the heavy mission to enjoy life. He met a women named Namoi in that time. They would be friends and do things together. As time grew they became closer and closer and became in love. In some months they got married. They then had a child, a girl named Yuki.
Due to all the success of his brother, Kenshi become much jealous and hateful. He even tried harming his bother, but was stopped. Kaiden was only was only a chuunin and Rai was considered the elite of the elite. They were only two years apart, so it made the pain worse for Kei. He then ran away, and is an enemy of the Kumo.
Rai left behind the village and his familiy for about a month in search for Kenshi, he cared about his brother still but wasnt getting him just so he could see him. Kenshi found Kei on his way to the Rain village, to join Akatsuki. Even through all the things they went to, Kei wouldnt go back by will.
Rai and Kenshi soaked theirselves in rain and argued. It was enough after a while. Rai had to bring his brother back by force. Kenshi was serious, even if he had to kill, now was the chance to prove how worthy he was. Kenshi and Rai faught back and forth for a while, but Rai came out on top, leaving Kenshi uncounsious. Rai took Kenshi back to the viallge and had him put in maximum sercurity prison for treason.
After 12 years, his wife took over the family resturant and Yuki was now a gennin smart like her father and was a notable kunoichi. She wanted to be a medic nin, like the legendary Lady Tsunade. Their home life was good. Then kenshi got a calling to help the village.
Optional pet:
RP Samples:
Scenario 1: You are walking through the village square of whatever village you inhabit, and you happen to find a lost wallet on the ground, and it belongs to one of the Kage's advisors, and it contains quite a bit of money. Then, before anything else, you see some Jounin down the road. What are you going to do?
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Rai walked down the road ambily. The stars began to gaze as it became darker. His hair blew in his face cuasing him to loose his sight. As he tried to gain back control, he stumbled upon something. "Hmm..." He rubbed his chin and bent down looking for what he stepped on. It was made of leather, and it looked think. Slowly, Rai bent down and put his hand on it. "This is... a wallet?"
Holding both flaps, he opened it and his eyes became wide as he stared at it. "Whoa! I just hit the jackpot" Grinning widely, Rai looked at the stack of money on the inside, it was so fresh. "Wait a minute... I dont know if I should take it" Confused, he though about then, then he cuaght a glimpse of a figure approaching. "Its a jounin, I could give him the wallet, or hide it" Rai stood there like nothing happened, all casual.
"Rai? What are you doing at here to late" The Jounin asked curious. Rai put the wallet behind his back. "Oh, Im just taking a walk... you know, to let dinner settle" He made a slight grin, it was fake of course to hide the truth. The Jounin sighed, "Really... I guess I will believe you." he tapped Rai on the shoulder and walked past him.
"Phew, Im going home" Rai looked at the wallet one more time nd felt guilt stricken. "Alright, I think I will put it back" Feeling mad, but at the same time proud, he put the wallet on the ground where he found. Rai felt good he did the right thing and strolled away.
Scenario 2: You are walking through a forest when a smoke bomb explodes, and a bandit emerges from the trees with a knife in hand, and he charges towards you with the intent to kill. What are you going to do?
******
Rai had a mission soon with his squad. This one required some research before they made they started it. To get things done quicker, they split apart so Rai was alone. He hoped threw trees slowly, forced back by a unknown force. He covered his eyes to sheild it from smokey air. "A smoke bomb... who's there!" Cuaghing he looked around and stood in a fighting stance. Hearing footsteps footsteps, a glare from shining metal caught his eye. A bandit emerged from the tree with a knife.
Suprised, Rai stood their looking on at the man with intent to kill. It charged at him with the kinfe pointed toward Rai. With no thinking time, he had to react quickly. The man was even closer and reached his arm out and swung. Rai ducked under and dodged. The man went past him and landed on a strong tree branch. Rai formed a handseal, "Shadow Cloe Jutsu!" A large cloud of smoke emerged and a clone of Rai came about. Rai wiped sweat off his face and stared the man down.
He charged at Rai again. Pulling out a kunai, Rai put it infromt off the knife, blocking the attack. While the bandit had the break free, Rai's clone came up and with his hand in a fist. With force, it puched the bandit in the gut. The bandit crouched, holding the pain in. With time to spare, the real Rai leaned over and brought his leg up and kicked the mans head. He had no defense and the bandit went to the ground and cuased a thud. The dirt came up and spread out from the impact. Rai threw the kunai a him and ensured he could not move. "All in a days work fro Rai"
Alias: Raiden
Gender: Male
Alliance: Kumogakure
Age: 32
Alignment: Good
Appearance:
Clan: None
Personality: Very honest and reliable, he always tries to be there for anyone and wants to be trusted. He likes to thinks and has plenty of witts. Moraly, he believes that you should never turn your back on who you trust and care for. He likes to talk to others and train. His favorite food is dumplings. he dislike arrogance. His dream is for his village to overcome any obstacle. His influences are his dad and friend
Ninja Rank: Kage
Skills/Specialties: Kensjutsu, Strategy
Elemental Affinity(ies): Lightning, Water, Earth
History/Background Story: Rai was born in the cloud village. In about two more years, is little brother was born, his name was Kenshi. His father was an elite jounin known through the land and his mom was stay at home person taking care of the family. As Kenshi and Kei got older, they had dreams of being even more than their father.
Rai was a collected kid, while Kenshi was the joker. He had wanted to join the academy right away, but he was only 7. His mom had total disagreement with the idea. She would always say it was too dangerous, while his dad said its time to toughen hime up abit, be ahead of his age.
Rai joined the academy at 7 to get a head start. He was one of the best in his class. He was said to be a a prodigy, of his father at least and would came the prestigious family one of the best in the next generation. His dad set the standard.
He was about to graduate at 8, but a tragedy happened. His father went on his third S-Rank mission. He was battling the enemy and was never found when the mission was done. Some say he was dead, others said he could handle the pressure so he ran away.
Rai was slacking due to the lost and the put downs about how his father was a coward, and how he would be too. After a while, it gave him a drive. He would defeat the odds, and bring his name back to the top. After the hardest training he had did by then, he graduated at 9. Kei was now a gennin and the best in his squad.
His squad leader tuaght everyone a summoning. Rai learned Kuyochise no jutsu: Dog. Since his chakra was very limited at the time, his dog was very small, but good enough for his time. Through exploring and doing missions, rai met a knew friend. His name was Kaiden. They were like stone, and had each others back threw thick and thin. That bond would last forever.
For becoming a gennin, he recieved a sword. Engraved was his family's name and one word, りょこう, 旅行, which meant Journey. It was there to say never give up on the journey and expect a reward for never giving up. It was a prized possesion. He only used it for good luck in hard battles.
Trainers from the village heard his name. He showed potentail and it gave him a chance. Not only did he progress for missions, he was taught by elite trainers and would be great. His younger brother was fading in the shadows. Kei had stregnth and entred the chuunin exams. He became a chuunin at 10 years old. It was a honor, as he was the number one rookie to be in the exams.
In His family, to be considered a real ninja, by the age of 12 you must have invented one Lightning jutsu. Every jutsu made form every child form generation to generation was written in the scroll of secret. Only the Otawa family, would be allowed to read, for one reason, it required a opening seal only know by the Otawa family and will never be said to others. Kei made a jutsu and was able to write his name and jutsu in the scroll. Then he got praised and teaching.
For years, he trained with elders and his other trainers. He found a teacher too. For a 4 years, he trained in the mountains and mastered the ninja arts. Rai came back to the village to remake his life. He showed great ability and was promoted to Jounin at 16. He went on some of those most important missions. He would be known as the the Kumo Village's Raiden.
His grandfather passed one night. He was an enturpenuer, owning a restuarant by the name of 'The Cherry Blossom' it was a succcesful place in his part of the village. Kai inheritted about 1/3 the money. Kai saved some of it for a family, and some for emergencies. The rest was used for toning up his inventory and armor.
Rai joined Anbu for the Kumo village going on stelth missions and assasinations. He went everywhere and thru this he could find out village techniques for the Kumo's use. It was a great help for the village strategy against enemies.
He took some time off form all the heavy mission to enjoy life. He met a women named Namoi in that time. They would be friends and do things together. As time grew they became closer and closer and became in love. In some months they got married. They then had a child, a girl named Yuki.
Due to all the success of his brother, Kenshi become much jealous and hateful. He even tried harming his bother, but was stopped. Kaiden was only was only a chuunin and Rai was considered the elite of the elite. They were only two years apart, so it made the pain worse for Kei. He then ran away, and is an enemy of the Kumo.
Rai left behind the village and his familiy for about a month in search for Kenshi, he cared about his brother still but wasnt getting him just so he could see him. Kenshi found Kei on his way to the Rain village, to join Akatsuki. Even through all the things they went to, Kei wouldnt go back by will.
Rai and Kenshi soaked theirselves in rain and argued. It was enough after a while. Rai had to bring his brother back by force. Kenshi was serious, even if he had to kill, now was the chance to prove how worthy he was. Kenshi and Rai faught back and forth for a while, but Rai came out on top, leaving Kenshi uncounsious. Rai took Kenshi back to the viallge and had him put in maximum sercurity prison for treason.
After 12 years, his wife took over the family resturant and Yuki was now a gennin smart like her father and was a notable kunoichi. She wanted to be a medic nin, like the legendary Lady Tsunade. Their home life was good. Then kenshi got a calling to help the village.
Optional pet:
RP Samples:
Scenario 1: You are walking through the village square of whatever village you inhabit, and you happen to find a lost wallet on the ground, and it belongs to one of the Kage's advisors, and it contains quite a bit of money. Then, before anything else, you see some Jounin down the road. What are you going to do?
********
Rai walked down the road ambily. The stars began to gaze as it became darker. His hair blew in his face cuasing him to loose his sight. As he tried to gain back control, he stumbled upon something. "Hmm..." He rubbed his chin and bent down looking for what he stepped on. It was made of leather, and it looked think. Slowly, Rai bent down and put his hand on it. "This is... a wallet?"
Holding both flaps, he opened it and his eyes became wide as he stared at it. "Whoa! I just hit the jackpot" Grinning widely, Rai looked at the stack of money on the inside, it was so fresh. "Wait a minute... I dont know if I should take it" Confused, he though about then, then he cuaght a glimpse of a figure approaching. "Its a jounin, I could give him the wallet, or hide it" Rai stood there like nothing happened, all casual.
"Rai? What are you doing at here to late" The Jounin asked curious. Rai put the wallet behind his back. "Oh, Im just taking a walk... you know, to let dinner settle" He made a slight grin, it was fake of course to hide the truth. The Jounin sighed, "Really... I guess I will believe you." he tapped Rai on the shoulder and walked past him.
"Phew, Im going home" Rai looked at the wallet one more time nd felt guilt stricken. "Alright, I think I will put it back" Feeling mad, but at the same time proud, he put the wallet on the ground where he found. Rai felt good he did the right thing and strolled away.
Scenario 2: You are walking through a forest when a smoke bomb explodes, and a bandit emerges from the trees with a knife in hand, and he charges towards you with the intent to kill. What are you going to do?
******
Rai had a mission soon with his squad. This one required some research before they made they started it. To get things done quicker, they split apart so Rai was alone. He hoped threw trees slowly, forced back by a unknown force. He covered his eyes to sheild it from smokey air. "A smoke bomb... who's there!" Cuaghing he looked around and stood in a fighting stance. Hearing footsteps footsteps, a glare from shining metal caught his eye. A bandit emerged from the tree with a knife.
Suprised, Rai stood their looking on at the man with intent to kill. It charged at him with the kinfe pointed toward Rai. With no thinking time, he had to react quickly. The man was even closer and reached his arm out and swung. Rai ducked under and dodged. The man went past him and landed on a strong tree branch. Rai formed a handseal, "Shadow Cloe Jutsu!" A large cloud of smoke emerged and a clone of Rai came about. Rai wiped sweat off his face and stared the man down.
He charged at Rai again. Pulling out a kunai, Rai put it infromt off the knife, blocking the attack. While the bandit had the break free, Rai's clone came up and with his hand in a fist. With force, it puched the bandit in the gut. The bandit crouched, holding the pain in. With time to spare, the real Rai leaned over and brought his leg up and kicked the mans head. He had no defense and the bandit went to the ground and cuased a thud. The dirt came up and spread out from the impact. Rai threw the kunai a him and ensured he could not move. "All in a days work fro Rai"
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Re: Rai Otawa, Kumo, Kage
†Kaji-Kanto† Sat Feb 14, 2009 3:52 pm
*Applauds* This... is very nice in my view. However since its such a big position could i please ask for another rp sample to be sent to me in a pm. Make it a fight with a user who uses shadow based jutsu's ( A nara basicly). Make it long and exciting and you might just get the position. Please and Thank you.
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Re: Rai Otawa, Kumo, Kage
†Kaji-Kanto† Sat Feb 14, 2009 5:04 pm
I personally loved your rp sample ive sent it to the other mod's and we will discuss it and we will give you a ansewer hopefully by Tonight. If you want you can start making eguipment and such. 
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Re: Rai Otawa, Kumo, Kage
Blast Sat Feb 14, 2009 5:07 pm
Thanks very much, Ill be posting some things by then for sure 
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Re: Rai Otawa, Kumo, Kage
Guest Sat Feb 14, 2009 5:14 pm
I second Kaji's motion. This is of an exceptional level. I congratulate you.
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